"Eden," by Emily Grosholz
In lurid cartoon colors, the big baby
Dinosaur steps backwards under the shadow
Of an approaching tyrannosaurus rex.
“His mommy going to fix it,” you remark,
Serenely anxious, hoping for the best.
Dinosaur steps backwards under the shadow
Of an approaching tyrannosaurus rex.
“His mommy going to fix it,” you remark,
Serenely anxious, hoping for the best.
After the big explosion, after the lights
Go down inside the house and up the street,
We rush outdoors to find a squirrel stopped
In straws of half-gnawed cable. I explain,
Trying to fit the facts, “The squirrel is dead.”
Go down inside the house and up the street,
We rush outdoors to find a squirrel stopped
In straws of half-gnawed cable. I explain,
Trying to fit the facts, “The squirrel is dead.”
No, you explain it otherwise to me.
“He’s sleeping. And his mommy going to come.”
Later, when the squirrel has been removed,
“His mommy fix him,” you assert, insisting
On the right to know what you believe.
“He’s sleeping. And his mommy going to come.”
Later, when the squirrel has been removed,
“His mommy fix him,” you assert, insisting
On the right to know what you believe.
The world is truly full of fabulous
Great and curious small inhabitants,
And you’re the freshly minted, unashamed
Adam in this garden. You preside,
Appreciate, and judge our proper names.
Great and curious small inhabitants,
And you’re the freshly minted, unashamed
Adam in this garden. You preside,
Appreciate, and judge our proper names.
Like God, I brought you here.
Like God, I seem to be omnipotent,
Mostly helpful, sometimes angry as hell.
I fix whatever minor faults arise
With band-aids, batteries, masking tape, and pills.
Like God, I seem to be omnipotent,
Mostly helpful, sometimes angry as hell.
I fix whatever minor faults arise
With band-aids, batteries, masking tape, and pills.
But I am powerless, as you must know,
To chase the serpent sliding in the grass,
Or the tall angel with the flaming sword
Who scares you when he rises suddenly
Behind the gates of sunset.
To chase the serpent sliding in the grass,
Or the tall angel with the flaming sword
Who scares you when he rises suddenly
Behind the gates of sunset.
All parents worry for the safety of their child. In Emily Grosholz’s narrative poem, “Eden,” she explores the theme of wanting to preserve the innocent and naïve nature
of children. The beginning of the poem
has an almost whimsical feel to it. It has a light-hearted tone, discussing “lurid
cartoon colors” and “big baby dinosaur[s],” elements that seem to come from the
ever-active imagination of a child. The
theme of preserving innocence is further explored after the child finds “a
squirrel stopped in straws of half-gnawed cables. “ In the midst of death, the
ignorant optimism of the child convinces him that the squirrel is merely
sleeping, and that “mommy will fix him.” We are placed inside the mind of a
child, the mask of “mommy will fix it’’ protecting us from real life.
The
tone of the poem begins to shift with the third stanza. Instead of the light-hearted
tone that reflects the mind of the child, it becomes profound as we look into
worried the mind of the mother. The mother alludes to the Garden of Eden;
comparing her child to the “freshly minted, unashamed Adam” and herself to God.
Like God, she is an omnipotent creator, always there to fix “whatever minor
faults arise with bandaids, batteries, masking tape, and pills.” The tone is instructive,
yet mournful, as the mother still longs to protect her child, teaching them how
to see the cartoon colors in a world full of squirrels in half-gnawed cables. However, she knows she is “powerless” to the evil, pain, and destruction in the
world; the “serpent sliding in the grass.”
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